#1
HERE COMES THE SUN

I've been through my fair share of troubles
I've shed my fair share of tears
These days have been filled with nothing but misery
It's been a tough few years...

But your the sunshine peeking over the horizon
The only thing I've got to believe in
Please take away this misery this solitude it's killing me
All I need is your company

Take away, take away, take away, take away,
Take away, take away this pain... all i got for now suggestions appreciated CRIT 4CRit
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#2
pretty good, I would seriously suggest altering the title though. Its a beatles song. In other word, its one of the biggest songs of the biggest band,
I once received a bra... with "I Love John" embroidered on it. It thought it was pretty original. I didn't keep it, mind you - it didn't fit. - John Lennon

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