#2
Not bad, man. I liked that. Keep working on the vocals, they sound good, but you're flat at a lot of points and you don't sound like you want to be singing, so work on that.
#3
Thanks. I'm really just winging it on the singing, trying to figure it out as I go. I'm pretty self-conscience about singing in general. I did the guitar part separate from the vox though, and the bridge and fills were just improved. (I was to lazy to go back and fix it) Hopefully I'll get a full version soon.
#4
Quote by snacnam
Thanks. I'm really just winging it on the singing, trying to figure it out as I go. I'm pretty self-conscience about singing in general. I did the guitar part separate from the vox though, and the bridge and fills were just improved. (I was to lazy to go back and fix it) Hopefully I'll get a full version soon.


Yeah, same here. I feel like in a band situation, I am a lot better than when I record. Everything is so loud, and I feel like I can sing my heart out, while when I record, it's just me and some headphones, and that makes me feel like I can't sing, so yeah. Good luck man!
#5
like someone said before, the vocals sound kind of droll... but the more u practice the better u will good, also ease off on the effects applied to ur voice. the guitar playing is alright, the arrangement is different, but that's not a bad thing. keep practicing and you'll get better!
#6
Thanks. I've done a new version of the full song, with, what to me, sounds like much better vox. I also changed up the effects and stuff so they arn't to overbearing. Hopefully I'll get an upload of it soon.