not bad man, did you guys record this live or separately? near the end I thought it was better, the rhythm and lead sync-ed up well.

either way there are some good ideas here, you could spend some time hashing them out part by part and it would really take it to the next level

keep it up man!
He always says he's going to record stuff for me and never does, so I took one of his songs and added the lead to it. So I did it without him knowing in about 5 minutes, haha.

I've only listened to his song 3 times before, so I just winged it trying to get the feel of the song correct. He does want me to write a solo though, so we can play it live. Which, I'm sure I can work up the patience to do.