Just to let you know, this is on the spot, so any crits welcome

Time's ticking

Verse 1
The world is a funny place
Nothing ever goes according to plan
Nobody is as warm to us
As they were 10 years ago

So hurry
It's going

Time's ticking
Don't let the world ecape from you
Why can't you just
Choose the fate you want to do

This is all I have at the moment
Doesn't sound right to me for some reason
Any help welcome
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