sukajamie
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2009
32 IQ
#1
hi guys.

this is my first song that i wrote and would like to hear any feedback from you guys.
its more of a post-rock-ish kinda music so yeah...no shredding or whatsoever :P

hey...enjoy
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sukajamie
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2009
32 IQ
#4
why thank you

wolf: i dont know....i never good with vocals. so i just gonna leave it be i guess
edgespear
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Join date: May 2006
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#6
That's really cool actually... I really like the harmonisation with the bass, especially in bars 3, 5 and 7 where it goes 11\9 9\7
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sukajamie
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2009
32 IQ
#7
Quote by edgespear
That's really cool actually... I really like the harmonisation with the bass, especially in bars 3, 5 and 7 where it goes 11\9 9\7


errrr i dont know what you're saying but thanks anyway!
i'm pretty much influenced by Caspian when i wrote this song.
The 7.18
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Join date: Nov 2008
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#8
Wow, very cool! Only thing i could really say to improve it is maybe dont have the repeats so much, it gets a bit tedious when you hear the same thing over & over. What i'd suggest is maybe taking the repeats out, copy & pastng it as many times as you want it to repeat, and put subte differences into each time. (if that makes sense)

check mine out f you like

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1070059
sukajamie
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Join date: Feb 2009
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#9
ah i get what you mean. maybe i it is meant to be sung or something. or i just discard the repetition so the song is much shorter.