Swing Life Away

Hey this my acoustic cover of Swing Life Away. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! I know I messed up the singing a lot.. I guess I get nervous when I know I'm being watched/will be watched eventually lol.

Regardless, I think it turned out pretty well and I appreciate comments/ratings on youtube as well =]

How can i forget the way you led me through the path into heaven to leave me behind?
It's pretty good. Your rhythm is a little off but I really think if you perfect that it will sound a lot better. You do have a good voice though, and you did the guitar part well. Just keep working on the rhythm and I think you'll perfect it in no time. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1068604
Last edited by jman1223 at Feb 15, 2009,
thanks man, I left a comment in your thread.
How can i forget the way you led me through the path into heaven to leave me behind?
I have been playing this song for a week now. Most of it I had to learn by ear with the help of some tabs and videos. You play the chorus completely differently than I do. I will post a video soon on Youtube. I probably won't go for the singing part... because that would be a mess. Lol. Could you check it out when I do?
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It's got a lot of potential, and the chorus sounds good, but you really, really need to learn the words. It's not a long song, just listen to it a few times and sing along, that should help. Solo was probably the best part of the song. That sounded really good. I really hope you re record this once you learn the words haha, cause the parts that you were confident about sounded really good.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1093753