o d y s s e y
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Join date: Apr 2007
326 IQ
#2
good **** man, catchy as hell.
Existence well what does it matter.
Peres.T.Peanut
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Join date: Oct 2008
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#3
The midi doesnt work for me. But all in all, its a pretty sweat song mate. Great Job
Xinspaly
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Join date: Apr 2008
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#5
Wow, i usually dont venture far from GB&C but thats freakin sick man i love it!
M Power
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#6
Middle school...def great talent for your age or for anyone really. Do you have a drummer in your class who can keep up with this song or a second guitar player?
androidkaita
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Join date: Jul 2006
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#7
Nice job, but it sounds a lot like My Fears Have Become Phobias - As Blood Runs Black
Gerbs
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Join date: Jun 2007
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#8
S'good, but THE BASS PLAYS TOO MUCH ROOT NOTE :'(
bulletrocks522
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Join date: May 2007
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#9
Quote by Gerbs
S'good, but THE BASS PLAYS TOO MUCH ROOT NOTE :'(

Yeah I know, I didnt work to hard on the drums/bass because its just showig off my skills.
MattAnderson111
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Join date: Dec 2007
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#10
Quote by androidkaita
Nice job, but it sounds a lot like My Fears Have Become Phobias - As Blood Runs Black


I made that connection at a few parts, but this song is alot more light metalcore, id say alot like all that remains, since its even in standard D, but there are some parts like my fears have become phobias.
Poop.


Yes, poop.
adaeha
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Join date: Jun 2007
435 IQ
#11
Definately a great piece, even if it is slightly metalcore Love the leads. Drums pretty cool, simple but fulfils its uses. Harmonies

As a whole piece its pretty kickass, the really isn't a section that is out. All the riffs are generally pretty sweet. Just need to have an ending though.

Biggest problem for me is bass, cause as a bassist, that is a really lame bassline, the only interesting bit for bass is bars 23-26, and thats just following the guitars.

Also could world with a "solo", not like the lead "melodies" you got, I mean a proper solo solo, if ya get what I mean? Anyways, 9/10 I'd say.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1069177