#2
Some of your bends are rough, or you miss them completely. Work on bending to pitch as well. On other other hand, your vibrato is pretty solid and you have a pretty good feel.
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#3
thanks for giving a listen, and i totally agree. especially in the intro, i definitely missed some stuff there (first show, very nervous haha). but then again i've only been playing for about a year and a half, so i can't be too hard on myself