#1
Late at night I lay there wondering, what I did wrong,
I wasn't strong enough,
everyday in class I think of ways, to make it, better,
Maybe with a letter saying

I liked you,
you liked someone else,
baby please help me see,
why you did what you did to me,
I walk around thinking I'm not good enough,
was it that or was it something else,
why did I love you


Sitting here wondering, what to do,
am I going to be with you,
I though I saw my future right,
was I dreaming late at night,
but I kept on thinking baby

I liked you,
you liked someone else,
baby please help me see,
why you did what you did to me,
I walk around thinking I'm not good enough,
was it that or was it something else,
why did I love you


This is one of my recent songs...
Please tell me what you think of it
Last edited by Caylah Nobockie at Feb 16, 2009,
#2
Been done to many times and cheesy, sorry.
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#3
Quote by Gord@k
Been done to many times and cheesy, sorry.



why does everyone have to be such a dick try being nice jees.

i like it its got some meaningful lines in there. maybe not the most poetic song around. it gets to the point try making it more "beautiful" when you right songs about love or ****ty relationships you wanna give the feeling your talking about "love" and not just getting a BJ from some *****.

but i like it good work