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http://www.youtube.com/user/Bananaman395

It's the display vid on the page.


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#2
Very nice man. I couldn't find any mistakes

I rated 5 :-)


are you using delay in the chorus riff?
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#3
only thing i didn't like was the tone, but that can be remedied. very well played sir.
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#5
Man that was pretty ****ing sick. Good job bro. I dunno what that one guy was thinking, I think that tone went good with this song. For just over a year of playing you're ****en good man. I'm self taught to, I think it's better that way, then you can learn what you want, how you want. You're not copying someone else and being taught to be just like they are lol. C4C? (in sig below)
#6
Quote by mlfarrell
Very nice man. I couldn't find any mistakes

I rated 5 :-)


are you using delay in the chorus riff?


I am using reverb in the chorus. Adds a nice epic sound if used appropriately.
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only thing i didn't like was the tone, but that can be remedied. very well played sir.


Thanks. Yea with some better recording gear I could probably get the truth captured in my recordings... but with my current gear the tone is misinterpreted
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#8
very nice

and you haven't been playuing for long too
i have been playing for 3 years and struggle with the intro change of arpeggios

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#9
Pretty good, a couple of slips in some parts but overall pretty good. The tone was quite muddy, but it's not a massive issue.
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#10
it may be the recording setup. i've had that problem with my own stuff. I feel for ya on that one man
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Quote by speshul k 1207
it may be the recording setup. i've had that problem with my own stuff. I feel for ya on that one man



I'll try messing around with my EQ. I might find some new sounds on there.
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#12
Good cover man.


Only thing i can say is it isnt super tight.
And seems like you're struggling abit in some parts, mainly the verse and intro/chorus riff.
All that is down picked(i think, although my memory is sketchy) and i dont think you are down picking the start etc.

But wicked job, especially seeming as you've only been playing for a yearish.

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#13
yea some parts are a little iffy i guess. thanks
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#14
Badass dude but check out the pinch harmonics :P

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#15
Not a bad effort but i was dissapointed not to hear some pinch harmonics :S
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#16
Yea im working on the harmonics lol. Sometimes i nail them, sometimes they never come out... more practice on that I guess. I'll check out some tuts to see if my technique is correct.
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#18
im hooking straight up from my me-20 to the computer and im only using that **** squat line6 to tell if im playing along with the song. and yea i was pretty pissed lol.
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