#1
sorry guys someone reported the last one (that sucks) but heres a nice brand new thread in which everyone helps everyone els write songs and therefore helps us all live in harmony. world peace.
thats when laughter turnes to tears
ive felt this way (over the years)
time fades but i remain (unchanged)

times are changing
tempers are raging
but i remain (unaging)

any help on how to improve this.