Here's a couple of polys put together which I am basing a song off. This all started from screwing around with some crazy time signatures but I think it has some potential. I had already written lyrics but had no intention of using them on this tune but now that it is starting to come together I'm seeing them fall into place nicely over the palm muted stuff.

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its pretty cool, i admire the fact that you're going for different. what would REALLY be cool though is if you actually switched from the quarter note. since it all falls over the quarter note it doesn't really feel polyrhythmic; it just feels like a unique rhythm.