#1
Little red world dancing in the Cosmos
with your mysterious sea of sounds
Your allures I wish I to see closer
may I land and look around

your lands so dark and desolate
nothing to greet me but a midnight glance
yet its still raining and I'm still dreaming
and the blue wind beckons me to dance


yet for now I am astounded by your moon
with its Black Saints and radio gnomes
but planet earth is calling and I must go
put an end it to it all and an end our show
may you never the devils music again
#2
Hi, please read the rules so you know why this was closed. And next time, instead of reposting, try giving critiques to others and leaving a link in your post so that they can critique your piece.

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