Little red world dancing in the Cosmos
with your mysterious sea of sounds
Your allures I wish I to see closer
may I land and look around

your lands so dark and desolate
nothing to greet me but a midnight glance
yet its still raining and I'm still dreaming
and the blue wind beckons me to dance

yet for now I am astounded by your moon
with its Black Saints and radio gnomes
but planet earth is calling and I must go
put an end it to it all and an end our show
may you never the devils music again
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