#1
[v]
When the world stops spinning what will you be doing
playing thoughtless games on the edge of town?
it always seems that way
it seems that way when your life hits the ground

[c]
your life revolves around the latest trends
you follow the crowd relentlessly
when your time comes what will you do then?

[v]
your friends all think you're the leader
but when it comes down to it
you back off into the corner
and hope everything will change for the better

[c]
your life revolves around the latest trends
you follow the crowd relentlessly
when your time comes what will you do then?


what will happen when your life turns black
and your friends are all gone onto the next thing
will you sit at home crying
or will you live your life right to the end

[c]
your life revolves around the latest trends
you follow the crowd relentlessly
when your time comes what will you do then?


what do you think?
Quote by output24
Haha, owned!
U win fender.


Quote by wiggy1988
teacher- Some slave owners would fight duels using their slaves
Me- So, sort of like Pokemon with people..Black man, I choose you!
Last edited by fender-lespaul at Feb 17, 2009,
#2
eeeuh... it ends a bit too dark. would be a proper rock(not metal) tune tho.


btw: your signature jokes are naaat funny.
#3
i wrote for a rock style band

the sigs arent funny but i cba changing em
Quote by output24
Haha, owned!
U win fender.


Quote by wiggy1988
teacher- Some slave owners would fight duels using their slaves
Me- So, sort of like Pokemon with people..Black man, I choose you!
#4
it always seems that way
it seems that way when your life hits the ground


Repeating "seems that way" sounds a little bulky to me. Maybe stretch some of the words and add some pauses in the second line instead?