#1
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Broken-hearted once again
Seems like I'm miseries best friend
And oh how misery loves company

How many mistakes will I make
How much heartache can one man take
Before they give up on everything

Whoa... I put my trust you
Whoa... I've never been so used

I'm so sick of this insecurity
I'm so sick of being somebody
I don't want to be

This little game we play
It's killing me
I gave you everything

Whoa... I put my trust you
Whoa... I've never been so used

Sittin underneath the stars
Strummin out on my guitar
Music is my therapy
It takes away the agony

Whoa... I put my trust you
Whoa... I've never been so used

Borken-Hearted once again...
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#3
Yeah the verses are quite cliche, the whole broken heart, mistakes, heartache thing.

'Sittin underneath the stars
Strummin out on my guitar
Music is my therapy
It takes away the agony'

This part I really like. Music is my therapy is a nice phrase, and I like how it only comes up in the song once.
#4
So emotional! You really got me to feel the same way man, and that's good. The only things I didn't agree with were word choice and rhythm in a couple of spots:

"Whoa... I put my trust you"
^^I feel like there should be a preposition or something here (Like 'trust in you'?)

"I don't want to be"
"It's killing me"
These lines seem like they're shorter as opposed to their rhythm scheme in the other verses. Maybe through in some more powerful words... "It's tearing me apart?"
And do you want it to rhyme with 'play'?

I really like the:
"Sittin underneath the stars
Strummin out on my guitar
Music is my therapy
It takes away the agony"

Keep that.

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#5
Line 3 just really ruins it for me..
it's really used and predictable.. and you just said misery the line before =|
i'd change that..

but other than that i thought it was allright (: you have a really good rhythm in the song.. i can kind of hear it; sounds sum 41-ish to me. xD; so yeah keep it up.