#1
This is my first song - didnt really spend much time so its abit simple. Any criticisms/tips would be much appreciated:


Cutting the threads and smashing the chains
Breaking them down HO!
Cutting the threads and smashing the chains
I will never more be bound

As free as the fire
As free as the wind
Is what I desire to be

But with that desire
Comes pain burning bright
The confort of chains i still seek

Bound by the temptress
Pointless resistance
My downfall is assured

As free as the fire
As free as the wind
Is what I desire to be
Last edited by thegreeneng at Feb 18, 2009,
#2
Hey man, check out the rules, and you'll know why the thread was closed. Once you've read them and this thread has been closed you can repost with a correct title.

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