Alright, constructive criticism? Stop bending. Seriously. All you did was pick the same note and bend it like 13 times, play something bluesy, then move on to a higher note and bend it another 58 times.

Also, This is the proper forum for recordings.

Catch me,
heal me,
Lift me back up to the Sun
I choose to live
that sounded like a bad version of strutter by kiss, far far far away from malmsteen, sorry bud keep practicing