vaporwave queen
Join date: Jun 2006
1,340 IQ
I was messing around a bit and this came to me. It's obvious that it's not finished as my mind blanked at the bridge. As usual to expect from me, alternate time signatures But anyway, any input is appreciated as always, but this one was just for fun. If you want it in GP4, ask.
Last edited by soundgarden1986 at Feb 19, 2009,
havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
The synths kind of remind me of the killers. The chorus was weird, I think there's something wrong with the measures or maybe it's just a weird time signature. The bridge is coming along nicely. I like what I've heard so far. Good job.

mind critting mine? (new one in sig) Thanks.
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2008
1,295 IQ
It's starting out very nicely. I like the atmospheric effects during the intro and the chorus. The only problem that I see is that at the verse parts where the chorused piano comes in, the chords that it plays clashes with the ones already being played. To me, it draws to much attention and just doesn't sound right. Just adjust those chords and everything will be fine.