#1
please check it out and give me some advice on how to improve it....

i will gladly crit any of your stuff if you do so..( its on my account)
Quote by EbEar
oh and yao151 i love the fact that you as a fan of metallica and slayer likes John Frusciante, i wish more people around here had an open mind like that


see...
I'm not narrow minded

just narrow dicked
#2
You are doing ok

The best advice is to play with other musicians if you can and if not practice to some backing tracks and jam.Practising to backing tracks lets you feel more part of a band and also helps train tempo.

There's quite a lot of sites about,

http://www.visionmusic.com/jamtracks.html

I've been playing way too many years now but I still like a jam online as you never know where it may lead musically.

HTH