Hey, my band recorded our first demo track last night, please excuse the sore throat

Comments and constructive criticism welcome.

***Short Sig***
It sounds like you recorded without using a metronome. Some parts are brutally out of time. Nice song though.
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the one thing i noticed besides it being out of time is that the bass was way to loud. and i thank you to hell and back for making the bass audible but if you cant hear the guitar its not worth it. awesome voice to its not everyday a garage band actually has a decent singer!