george8392
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this song's got kind of an upbeat feel. i kinda wrote for the lead to shine through most of the song. this is probably most influenced by Bayside.

just let me know what you like and what you don't like.

(i didn't put drums in one part of the song in the GP version; just haven't that's all)
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Last edited by george8392 at Feb 20, 2009,
ctb
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Perfect. All the way through.

The 11th fret note on the A string didn't sound too good to me. That is all!
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Quote by ctb
Perfect. All the way through.

The 11th fret note on the A string didn't sound too good to me. That is all!


lol, i meant to take that out. but yea thanks.
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rodrigomierh
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That was great. It kept me interested the whole time.

The solo was kind of bland, you could have done something more memorable.
The acoustic part after the solo was great. I liked the ending too.
Overall itw as a great song, Nice job.

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Quote by rodrigomierh
That was great. It kept me interested the whole time.

The solo was kind of bland, you could have done something more memorable.
The acoustic part after the solo was great. I liked the ending too.
Overall itw as a great song, Nice job.

Mind critting mine? (new one in sig) Thanks.


haha, yea writing solos is new territory for me so i'll work on that. thanks for the crits, i'll hit up your song soon.
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aceral1715
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#6
Great song. Loved the bridge and solo. Really nice feel to it overall. Nice choice of chords. Liked the way the solo ended with the Gm6/A#. Planning on writting lyrics?

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Geiger89
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Liked it alot, flowed really nicely and wasn't generic. I liked the solo 'cause it wasn't hitting out as many notes as was possible, it seemed really well thought out. Good job.
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Quote by aceral1715
Great song. Loved the bridge and solo. Really nice feel to it overall. Nice choice of chords. Liked the way the solo ended with the Gm6/A#. Planning on writting lyrics?

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i started writing lyrics for it, but i just work on them some more. i'll probably put a vocal track in the GP version of the song.

thanks for the crits.
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Quote by Geiger89
Liked it alot, flowed really nicely and wasn't generic. I liked the solo 'cause it wasn't hitting out as many notes as was possible, it seemed really well thought out. Good job.


thank you very much.
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