Here is a new "song" of mine I created. I have made a basic composition where drums and vocals can be added later on. It can be found on my profile.

Constructive critisicm is always welcome!

Last edited by poekie1337 at Feb 20, 2009,
Critting as I listen. Man, the guitar sounds good, this is a catchy melody riff you've got. I so wish that there were a killer drum track that would come in. I like the strummed sections too, but, they seem a little off time at points. I think it sounds like you bend the G# and it sounds a little sharp, but I could be wrong. Nice buildup to the ending! I like this a lot, good job man!



- Jesse