#1
Here is a new "song" of mine I created. I have made a basic composition where drums and vocals can be added later on. It can be found on my profile.

Constructive critisicm is always welcome!

C4C~!
Last edited by poekie1337 at Feb 20, 2009,
#2
Critting as I listen. Man, the guitar sounds good, this is a catchy melody riff you've got. I so wish that there were a killer drum track that would come in. I like the strummed sections too, but, they seem a little off time at points. I think it sounds like you bend the G# and it sounds a little sharp, but I could be wrong. Nice buildup to the ending! I like this a lot, good job man!

C4C

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1072409

- Jesse