total control over the guitar, cudos.
And the distinctive bass that cuts through around 1:20, really nice.
Overall super good sound, i can't honestly tell you what to improve.
You should try recording some vocals over that with a capable singer if you haven't already. Might sound even better?

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Last edited by Luppi at Feb 23, 2009,
nice man bass really catchy...beginning kinda reminded me of something hendrixy...maybe at some point it was a little overwhelming with different tracks at the same time...maybe pan some to left or right a little.

edit: oh and i listened to divine plan for creation and im diggin it keep em comin
Last edited by VolumePast10 at Feb 23, 2009,
This is pretty sweet. The Mars Volta influence is quite apparent (not that it's a bad thing). The production is good, but it'd be nice to have real drums. Oh and you're in the South Loop and like Thievery Corporation?? What a coincidence. Did you happen to see them at the Aragon Ballroom on Friday? ****ing awesome show, they played 2+ sets and had incredible lighting. I like your other tracks too. I can see Divine Plan for Creation being awesome live.

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You could've started this with a bit more subtle way and build it up. That being said the guitar and the frantic atmosphere sound damn cool. This has very jam-like feel to it, which I like a lot. I don't know what else to say about this really. Good stuff.

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