effect is cool but for some reason the overall doesn't sound right to me.

maybe too much effect?

sorry this probably wasn't helpful haha.
Thanks. I tried panning two tracks with effect, and then a raw one up the center to make them not to overbearing.
modulation + acoustic = weird. i'd say doubletrack the acoustic, then modulate it and delay it a bit so you still get that 'spacey' kind of effect. and the vocal effect just.. don't use it.

doesn't sound too bad otherwise.
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