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Hey everyone this is a song i just wrote its called:
1950's Dystopian society

Give me your advice and criticism!

The name has nothing to do with the song i just really like the concept of 1950's dystopian societies! haha here the song:


Sunrise sets come sudden sounds
Of getting better
Smell the rain come sunrise down
Its getting wetter

And the feathers
Of the birds come falling down
And the weather
Getting better

Sunsets rise come sudden sounds
Of getting better
Summer savors ash on ground
Its getting wetter

And the feathers
Of the birds come falling down
And the weather
Getting better