#1
The working title is called "Loss of Everything"


Let me drown myself in anxiety
Hope has left me here
Please just leave me be,
They'll only notice when your gone

The higher i climbed, The further i've fell
I've chosen to lay here, please don't save me,
Theres nothing you can do
I've lost all direction of where i'm ment to be

All dreams have blured into something more than ****ing useless
I can't see anymore, awake for days on end.
Drifting quickly into my own hell
Paralized from set-backs and indecisions
Giving up on my own life mission

Happiness is a fools dream, it doesn't exist.
Contentment is an ideal, it doesn't exist!
Love is a lie, it doesn't exist

Its so easy to let go, let me go
Theres nothing left you can say
I'm done, I'm through.
This is it.
#2
this is excellent.
Your dreams are all out of focus;
Knock you up when you're feeling down.
And all the world feels so unreal...


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Quote by ishmonkey
Hitler was really smart and could have been a good leader but he was kind of a douche to the Jews.
#3
Thanks dude, my first proper attempt at writing lyrics in this style.

Used to writing more poppy boy/girl relationship stuff
#4
yes, but I find that stuff like this that anyone can relate to, life-based or feeling/thoughts-based lyrics are better
anyway good job, keep it up
Your dreams are all out of focus;
Knock you up when you're feeling down.
And all the world feels so unreal...


COLORFUL COLORS
Quote by ishmonkey
Hitler was really smart and could have been a good leader but he was kind of a douche to the Jews.
#6
nice one
My only thing would be the ***ing useless bit, unless ive got the wrong rhythm in my head it didnt seem quite right in there.
Other than that i like it

if youd be kind to c4c mine? ^^
Tis in my sig "Ashes of Eden" one
#7
Quote by Danban
Thanks dude, have you got any lyrics up?

no but if you wanna see some I can bring them up
Your dreams are all out of focus;
Knock you up when you're feeling down.
And all the world feels so unreal...


COLORFUL COLORS
Quote by ishmonkey
Hitler was really smart and could have been a good leader but he was kind of a douche to the Jews.