#1
Here's my version, without a drum track.

If anyone can help me with adding some drums in there, I would appreciate it .

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#3
Stand up job. The only thing i would say is the distorted guitar seems a bit loud in comparison to everything else. Unfortunately, I can't help you with the drum track. But I can recommend you do an acoustic version of this! What's that? Not helpful you say? Damn...i'm sorry

full marks, lad

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#4
The distorted guitar is a bit too bright and too in the foreground. The verse guitar turned out really well. It has a nice soft chorusy sound. I like the dual vocal tracks.
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#5
Thanks for the input! I think I'll go ahead and adjust the distortion to be not so prominent.
#6
Great job man. The stereo vocals were a great effect. The rakes before the chorus sounded weird to me but it's all good. Great track.