#1
So i've started to write lyrics for both my projects. This is an Idea i've come up with for my Libertines like project. Its basically a character assasination of a guy who gave me **** a while back, when i hadn't even spoken to him before. Mixed in with a bit of 11th century legend, of the king who gives his name to the title. Some of it is personal, so if you don't get it, don't worry. I don't expect you to.

Blind eyes, turn them towards me
Mind’s eye, noble back story
If I looked into your eyes then I’d see

New lies, about your belief
It’s over; He’ll see your deceit
“God” only knows what your eyes have seen

I can see that you’re a
Criminally
Underestimated
Natural
Talent
It’s just as well
Because you’re a ****
And I can’t spell.

Magpie, if only you’d known what you've
Plagiarised. You reap what I’ve sown.
Everlasting false hypocracy.

You deny, sit on your throne
My soul cries, you turn in to stone
Washed back into your solemn sea.

i'm happy to do Crit for Crit if you want.
#2
Quote by Hammerzeit
So i've started to write lyrics for both my projects. This is an Idea i've come up with for my Libertines like project. Its basically a character assasination of a guy who gave me **** a while back, when i hadn't even spoken to him before. Mixed in with a bit of 11th century legend, of the king who gives his name to the title. Some of it is personal, so if you don't get it, don't worry. I don't expect you to.

Blind eyes, turn them towards me
Mind’s eye, noble back story
If I looked into your eyes then I’d see

New lies, about your belief
It’s over; He’ll see your deceit
“God” only knows what your eyes have seen

I can see that you’re a
Criminally
Underestimated
Natural
Talent
It’s just as well
Because you’re a ****
And I can’t spell.

Magpie, if only you’d known what you've
Plagiarised. You reap what I’ve sown.
Everlasting false hypocracy.

You deny, sit on your throne
My soul cries, you turn in to stone
Washed back into your solemn sea.


i'm happy to do Crit for Crit if you want.


Those lines were awesome, keep up the great work.

If you could, could you please rate some songs on my profile? Thanks.
#3
Cheers, glad you like it. Good to hear praise from someone i've seen around here for a long while.

I'll give your songs an ear.