I love this type of music!!
It started out great, but lost the punch when that single melody started and those kinda inconsistent drums came in. You should have kept the beat from the start a little longer.
Maybe more of those haunting voices. Great style man, keep doing this.
Also the second track with that hollow piano was just great, i'm impressed.

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