Wrote this a while ago. I'm definately not proud of it and it's far from being my favorite song I've ever written, but I would still like some feedback on it. Just so you know, I hate pretty much 75-85. That's just retarded and I have no idea what to do there, but I just know what I did was not the right thing to do. So some ideas on that would be greatly appreciated, thanks.
well, it's kinda generic radio-friendly metalcore. lots of that damn VI - VII - i progression, half-time drums every other bar, that kinda thing. it's not bad, but it's just too derivative
Very nice! I actually liked it from first to last note. I've got nothing else constructive to say but keep up the good work.