arcains_valor
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2006
744 IQ
#1
Wrote this a while ago. I'm definately not proud of it and it's far from being my favorite song I've ever written, but I would still like some feedback on it. Just so you know, I hate pretty much 75-85. That's just retarded and I have no idea what to do there, but I just know what I did was not the right thing to do. So some ideas on that would be greatly appreciated, thanks.
Attachments:
Acidic Convictions.zip
TMA-2
silly goose
Join date: May 2006
1,358 IQ
#2
well, it's kinda generic radio-friendly metalcore. lots of that damn VI - VII - i progression, half-time drums every other bar, that kinda thing. it's not bad, but it's just too derivative
Operator (CA)
some UG dude
Join date: Dec 2004
1,121 IQ
#3
Very nice! I actually liked it from first to last note. I've got nothing else constructive to say but keep up the good work.
Je parle français, excusez mon language inaproprié quand je m'exprime en anglais.