#1
well heres something i did on the spot quick last night before i went to bed, C4C of course. and heres a short description.

"Quickly recorded and completely free form based to try and capture one of those simple tunes you can mess with and play for hours on your acoustic. Just short and sweet and easy to manipulate further. Enjoy!"

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#2
Wich one is it?

If it's the one named "Fields" I thought it was a very nice song, but as you said you can manipulate it further, I say you should record it again but in a more organized way, making it less repetitive and changing the tempo mid song.

But don't take it seriously I'm very n00bish when it comes to music, especially original recordings.

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Here it is:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1074172
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