#1
Ignore the song title. It's just random.

Made this in about an hour and then tooka futher hour to record and mix down. It features a string section and some fingerpicked guitar as well as a more upbeat rock/metal section.

Check it out...

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#2
It's great, but just a little short. You might want to fix that, add in a little bit more to it.

Otherwise, the double lead guitar sounded good, the beginning was OK (it made the song unpredictable, I thought it would be like that the whole time) and, well, the title, like you say, was weird.

If it isn't too much to ask, would you mind to crit my songs?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1074588
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#3
I liked the beginning and when the distortion kicks in it's pretty badass. I'd lower the drum volume though, it distracts from the guitar.