#1
ok heya, im doing a project for religion class, and im writing a death metal-ish song for it xD. kk so i need lyrics, the theme is "what does it mean to be human" ive been trying to do this all week and im stumped so any contributions would be GREATLY considered
#5
Us contribute as lyrics or what? What instrument? and do you care if we include like, say odd instruments. I have this great idea for death metal accordion solo rhythms and breakdowns.
#6
I would assume you would want it to reflect you, what religion are you from or belief system? I am decent at writing things from an atheist, satanist, and general philosophical viewpoint. I could write a "Christian" piece, however I don't flow that way and would generally turn down writing something like that (unless of course its a lyric about the mythology of the bible, haha).
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#7
I AM NOT SAYING IT IS ALL LIKE THIS

but.....If your screaming is incomprehensible enough, you don't really need lyrics necessarily....

Just sayin.......
#8
Just shout
"the brains of justice sweat between my thighs
their power shall overwhelm
and because i shaved them for a laugh
they itch like a bastard!"
#9
No.
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#10
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I AM NOT SAYING IT IS ALL LIKE THIS

but.....If your screaming is incomprehensible enough, you don't really need lyrics necessarily....

Just sayin.......



you been readin my mind? :P thats what im going to do so i really only need cheesy christian lyrics to hand in on paper to make me look good xD

and i only need lyrics, ive got the music covered
#11
Being human, hmmm, you cum blood?
If you want serious help, dont go to the pit dude :P
#12
here's your first brutal religious line right here

"In the toooown where I was boooorn..."
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#13
Gots my liver
Gots my brain
Gots my bladder
Gots my name
Guess I'm a human....
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#14
More specific?

What exactly do you need help with?
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#15
Man generally death metal revolves around the topics of Life, Satan, Hate, Suffering, Gore, Abstract Themes, Vikings, etc.... but man it really depends on what genre..? And I noticed you live in Ottawa, good to see people enjoying death metal from here.


EDIT: What type of Death Metal genre do you want to write, Melo-Death, Just General Death Metal, Brutal Death Metal, Technical Death Metal.. etc.?
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#16
Well i googled it and here ya go

http://thebrokensymphony.blogspot.com/2008/12/what-it-means-to-be-human-pt-4.html

why not just take lines from this blog and put it into a song. simple.

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EDIT: What type of Death Metal genre do you want to write, Melo-Death, Just General Death Metal, Brutal Death Metal, Technical Death Metal.. etc.?



Theres more than one type of sh!t now?
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#19
yes its supposed to be ironic, im the satanist of the class xD, and its more of a melo-death kinda thing, and ill take a look at that blog
#20
Swollen with liquid
Ready to burst
A load of my lymph
Will quench this dead body's thirst
One month in the grave
twisted and half decayed
She turned a putrid yellow
I pissed in her maggot filled asshole
F**king the rotting
My semen is bleeding
The smell of decay
Seeps from her genital cavity
The smell was unbearable
As I unburied her
I cum blood from my erection
I feel it run
down her throat, swallow
Eyes glassy and vacant
body dug up to play with
Skin greasy and naked
tounguing her rotted anus
I need a live woman
to fill with my fluid
A delicate girl, to mutilate, f**k and kill
her body exceptional
she thought I was normal
but I wanted more
I came blood inside of her
chocking on the clot
gagging on the snot
gushing blood, from her mouth
bloody gel leaking out
Body buried in a shallow grave
Unmarked for none to find
The sickness I have left behind
Undetected go my crimes
The greatest thrill of my life
Violnet, climax
Serging serum
on my skin
Back from the dead
I am resurrected
to spew, putrefaction
#21
Well nail my ass to a cross and hang me out to die.
It's got death and metal.
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