I like it. The tones a bit weird for the tune, either too much Gain, or not enough, but the playing is great, the timing is good. Maybe you could try it with different sounds, does it sound good with a heavy crunch, it may over do it. One time, I covered Live Forever in heavy OD with power chords, instead of full ones, I had a blast with that one. Sometimes, thats all the change you need.

Overall: Great job, I'd love to see the whole band!
1981 Gibson Les Paul Custom (Black Beauty)
1980 Marshall JMP 2204