#1
This is an Industrial-Metal song I threw together using Acid Pro. It's nothing special, but I just wanted some thoughts about the song. It's not pure guitar based music, but there's some of that in there. Be honest, I can handle the truth.

http://www.acidplanet.com/components/embedfile.asp?asset=1211310&T=7197
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#2
There's too much going on, it gets confusing (in a bad way).
Definitely some good stuff in there though, the guitar work especially.
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#3
Thanks. Yeah, that was a common complaint that I've gotten. I kinda wanted it to be that way, but maybe it's too much. Were there too many layered beats?
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#4
You and i are into a similar style, maybe there is too much going on.
Nice beats however, and the guitar towards the end is great.
If you shorten the song and try to get the good stuff sooner, or at least samples of the good stuff, people will not lose any interest. You gotta think "why is there a lot going on?". I would definitely like to hear more dissonance throughout the song. Dissonance and some heavy industrial beats, that is when it gets good.

You know what; Check out my song and if you like it, leave a comment.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1072269
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