#1
So after not playing my '85 strat for weeks, I decided to lay this one down tonight. Quality is not the best (hey it's Mixcraft) but the playing is solid.

Song is in my profile. Comments/crits are much appreciated, and as always I'm down for C4C.

Between the velvet lies, there's a truth as hard as steel.
The vision never dies, life's a neverending wheel.
#2
I like the chorus in the intro, but its a bit much, maybe turn it down.

The solo is sick though

EDIT: The chorus at the end is much nicer.


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Last edited by wiliscool at Feb 24, 2009,
#4
thanks for the nice comments guys, I left comments on both your profiles

Between the velvet lies, there's a truth as hard as steel.
The vision never dies, life's a neverending wheel.
#5
the intro sounds awesome
i feel the distortion sounds a little digital because of the chords
but when the solo enters in, it sounds really good
very good, fluid and without mistakes (at least for me)
C4C?
Hola.
Last edited by luyano at Feb 24, 2009,
#6
Thanks man, it's very hard for me to get a distortion that doesn't sound muddy or "digital" as you said, I only use my multi-fx into my computer but once I get a new amp that should help.

Comments on your stuff shortly
Between the velvet lies, there's a truth as hard as steel.
The vision never dies, life's a neverending wheel.