#3
Not bad at all. The timing seems pretty accurate. All I can say is, like the dude above me said, is try to clean up that alternate picking part. It's still good, it just sounds a little rougher than the rest.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1075134

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