#1
this song is basically about my girlfriend
i know it's not exactly an original source of inspiration, but this song means a lot to me. as does she.


there was a time, when i couldn't breathe
couldn't see,
couldn't be,
when the world was dark and nothing to see
nothing changed the way i was more than you
theres something i do
that makes me mean something to you
you take my breath away,
i stumble and you help me up again
i fall and you help me back up again

the feeling i get
when you come to my side
hold me in your arms
that way i could never forget

the way you treat me is of love
and care, you break my mould
and make me a new man
you take my mould and craft it again

things went far and wide
i did things i never would believe
with you by my side
i can never fail,
to please you, my love,
my darling..
theres something i do
that makes me mean something to you
you take my breath away,
i stumble and you help me up again
i fall and you help me back up again

we shared love, we are as one
i would never run,
from your side
you are the one,
i always confide
my secrets in,
love me now, and forever
love me now, and forever

take me down, bring me back up
i know this will never stop
the gentle touch,
of your lips on mine,
the warm embrace,
your heart so close to mine...
theres something i do
that makes me mean something to you
you take my breath away,
i stumble and you help me up again
i fall and you help me back up again

i jumped back in the river
to cool the burning
of your love
i didnt even shiver
as you warmed me up again
the tickle of the flames
they will never maim
you keep me safe
as i would to you


there was a time, when i couldn't breathe
couldn't see,
couldn't be,
when the world was dark and nothing to see
nothing changed the way i was more than you
theres something i do
that makes me mean something to you
you take my breath away,
i stumble and you help me up again
i fall and you help me back up again

i fall and you help me back up again..
Quote by sebbsmith
It's hard to read with all these pictures distracting me.


I'm On The Highway To Hell!
Highway To Hell!
#2
Nice use of repetition....
It gets pretty hard to repeat lines without making it feel forced, but u pulled it off, n I'm glad I read this
I like how the chorus changes a bit each time, then goes back at the end, it's very moving
#3
Quote by greyeyedfire
Nice use of repetition....
It gets pretty hard to repeat lines without making it feel forced, but u pulled it off, n I'm glad I read this
I like how the chorus changes a bit each time, then goes back at the end, it's very moving


thanks, i appreciate it a lot,
Quote by sebbsmith
It's hard to read with all these pictures distracting me.


I'm On The Highway To Hell!
Highway To Hell!