#1
Hey all.

So i did this like tonight/last night whatever.
Short little clip of just the intro of Alaska by Between The Buried and Me.

pretty sloppy but i wanted to put it up quick for a band i am trying to get into.
Ill probably re-do it and also do the Selkies solo aswell so subscribe if you wanna hear that.


Yeah any crit would be great, ESPECIALLY on my technique, any part of my technique i could improve etc.
So yeah any crit is greatly appreciated.


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Rate and comment on it if you like.


Cheers.
#2
Thanks for critting my song.

Damn dude, that was **** hot playing, amazing dude, the sweeps were really clean and only had a bit of mistakes, the only thing you should work on is the tone but it's probably lacking because of the recording quality.

9/10
#4
pretttyy good
the sweeps were nice, just around like 15 seconds in sounded like a bit of mistake and your tonee sounded a bit weird but greatt
#5
nice job man thats a tough one, and you nailed it. Thats probably the only good alaska intro on youtube.
Last edited by metalman6669 at Feb 24, 2009,
#6
You need some mids and lows or a camera that can pick them up. The execution isn't bad, but it sounds weird by itself.
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#7
pretty good stuff. a few missed notes here and there but you can deff iron them out with just a little more practice. nice cover

On technique -- the most I can point out is the tapping. Keep your hand closer to the strings. Like just slide over them. More economic movement
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#8
sweet stuff man and thanks for the crit on my solo, I know about the timing issue but I only realised after I posted the vid =/ oh well, will work on that xD

about ur cover, played very clean, didn't miss any timing unlike me lol, the only thing is more in the end, it sounds a bit rushy for a few seconds and it sounds like you miss some notes, but other than that it was perfect!
#10
I thought it was very good, I can't play that for ****!

So you're awesome to me.


Though I'm not gonna lie, There obviously are better and perfect covers out there, but from what i can see if you re-did it you'd probably fix the little mistakes you made.