#1
Gothic spires are
changing the sky, piercing the
clouds behind themselves
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#2
I'll keep thinking on this one, but as of right now I don't think it's even close to developed enough to warrant a thread of its own. If I just saw this randomly, I would say it goes in the freepost thread.
...then again, you posted it as an independent thread for a reason. Be assured I'm thinking about this one as I go to sleep.
#3
Think Haiku, don't go looking for revelations, haha.
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#4
oh wow.
As I said on Carmel's thread, I don't have much knowledge of traditional poetic structures, but still.
I should've gotten that.
#5
It's not actually written in some formal haiku structure, it's just that idea of restricting yourself and trying to get across some sort of impression that I liked. I picked gothic spires because they impose in the skyline so much (and I was looking at some in the city) and I thought it'd be a 'recognisable' image.

EDIT: Lol at bumping my thing constantly
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#6
i just wanted to say i like this. I don't think it's groundbreaking. you know that. but it was a nice little read. changing the sky was a little weird but it's not obtusely so.

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