#1
Alrighty, I'm doing a project in English and decided to write a song. Thing is I suck at writing lyrics but I can lay down a track with anything you give me, granted that it's good. So if you have read this book can you please write lyrics for me! It shouldn't take too long if your good. I just need a simple verse-chorus-verse-chorus-interlude-chorus.

I beg of you Pit, please write me some lyrics!

P.S. I would goto the Songwriting and Lyrics forum but there is only like 20-30 people ever on there versus the 800 on here.
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#2
The pit does not do homework for you.
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#3
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This.
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The pit does not do homework for you.


Tis' not homework, it's a project, and I'm desperate.
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#8
Dude, Megadeth already wrote a song called this.
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#9
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Tis' not homework, it's a project, and I'm desperate.


So it's not compulsary?
#10
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+1, we are not your parents. Take it to the Songwriting section. Just cause there's not enough people there ha


I've got a friend who is amazing at writing Lyrics but there all emo. and I've seen people get help on here before.
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#11
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Tis' not homework, it's a project, and I'm desperate.

Is it for school? Then it's homework. Do your own.
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#12
It would be really awkward for me to write lyrics without music, really good book though. Have you actually read the book? Steinbeck was a phenomenal author and I would imagine that the words should inspire you somewhat.
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#13
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Is it for school? Then it's homework. Do your own.


I've tried for the past 2 weeks. I fail at lyrics.
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#14
What do you think of this? My friend Dave wrote this a few years back, he said you could use it:

The fire burns on and on
That drives me on till all is gone
Except the simple plans
Of mice and men

Back when I was just seventeen
I thought that I knew everything
I could make it in this scene
To be a rising star that only gleamed
But all the answers disagreed
With the questions held for me

I was legal now at twenty-one
I knew the way the world should run
My God just look what I had done
Simply drunk and having fun
Looked for friends, but I found none
All alone at twenty-one


The fire burns on and on
That drives me on till all is gone
Except the simple plans
Of mice and men

At twenty-five I was surprised
That I was even half alive
Somehow I managed to survive
I felt my body's doing time
And in my back a hundred knives
From my friends at twenty-five

And now as Gabriel sounds my warning bell
I'd buy your life, if you would sell
A year or two if less compelled
So live your life and live it well
There's not much left of me to tell
I just got back up each time I fell


The fire burns on and on
That drives me on till all is gone
Except the simple plans
Of mice and men


The fire burns on and on
That drives me on till all is gone
Except the simple plans
Of mice and men
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It would be really awkward for me to write lyrics without music, really good book though. Have you actually read the book? Steinbeck was a phenomenal author and I would imagine that the words should inspire you somewhat.


It is a great book. So good I read it the first day my teacher issued it. See the thing is I can put the emotion and mood in my music, but never my words.
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#17
The babies of mice and men
Is that what you're trying to imply
If so don't continue do not even begin to try
I have not read the book I'm sure it's great
But since you didn't read in your project will be late
You could of worked but instead you chose to masturbate
Wouldn't it be nice if I had read the story
Then I could help you write a song in which you'd get the glory
But alas this is not the case
You best be asking some other place

That is all
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#19
Chorus:

Oh George, why did you shoot me dead?
Why did you shoot me in my head?
Was it by force, proclivity, or by habit?
I just wanted to tend the rabbits.

Then just shred for a couple of hours.
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#20
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What do you think of this? My friend Dave wrote this a few years back, he said you could use it:



Yeah funny, but it doesnt have anything to do with the book and i have megadeth fans in my class
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#21
Like a rap?

Yo, Lenny was stupid mutha fucka
And George kept on actin like his brotha
But then Lenny killed a bitch
And now his dead carcass is in the ditch
Geoge was real sad
About the rabbits-they was mad
So now everyone is dead!
Hey nigga, say what?

.......what?
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#22
Gary Sinise FTW!
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#23
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The babies of mice and men
Is that what you're trying to imply
If so don't continue do not even begin to try
I have not read the book I'm sure it's great
But since you didn't read in your project will be late
You could of worked but instead you chose to masturbate
Wouldn't it be nice if I had read the story
Then I could help you write a song in which you'd get the glory
But alas this is not the case
You best be asking some other place

That is all


Have I ever mentioned how much I admire you and your witty lyric posts?
#24
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Like a rap?

Yo, Lenny was stupid mutha fucka
And George kept on actin like his brotha
But then Lenny killed a bitch
And now his dead carcass is in the ditch
Geoge was real sad
About the rabbits-they was mad
So now everyone is dead!
Hey nigga, say what?

.......what?




Do that, it would be hilarious.

^Nope, but I appreciate the comment
are you looking for a sig?... because that could potentially be fit in somewhere..
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#25
Quote by Just Andrew
Chorus:

Oh George, why did you shoot me dead?
Why did you shoot me in my head?
Was it by force, proclivity, or by habit?
I just wanted to tend the rabbits.

Then just shred for a couple of hours.


This here is pure genius!
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#27
Quote by Just Andrew
Chorus:

Oh George, why did you shoot me dead?
Why did you shoot me in my head?
Was it by force, proclivity, or by habit?
I just wanted to tend the rabbits.

Then just shred for a couple of hours.


hahahaha that is truely great. that is a good book
#28
Oh well. Im just gunna keep getting bashed so I'll take this to my friend. Thanks for a good chorus though Andrew.
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#30
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Do that, it would be hilarious.

^Nope, but I appreciate the comment
are you looking for a sig?... because that could potentially be fit in somewhere..


Haha no

I just remembered a couple of months ago for like a few days you were posting responses to threads in poetic form and it made my day.
#31
Its only 100 pages dude...

Pretty easy subject so you shouldn't have procrastinated and asked the pit about this when you could have done it just by thinking about the storyline
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#33
if you have to get other people to write the damn song, you shouldn't be using that as a premise for the project.

do your own fukking work.
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