#1
The days are getting easier
Shorter and fewer as they go
Unfortunately so have your letters
Despite the many I have to show

I know you’re getting busier
With each of the passing of lights
And each day brings a new contribution
to listing your daily plights

-Chorus-
Well I am...
still disappointed in the letters you haven't sent
It's hard to hate the love
Even when its the cause of what you resent

I find that writing down my feeligns expresses best
All my emotions in their truest
How Ironic is it that an angel clips my wings
yet every time I see her, my heart swings

Don't worry babe, despite my ties
My word will be sent every day
For as long as I'd wish for you
to hear every word I've yet to say

Even if you can't do for me
What I try to so hard to do for you
I'll always do my best to understand
Depsite of all ado

-Chorus-
Well I am...
still disappointed in the letters you haven't sent
It's hard to hate the love
Even when its the cause of what you resent

I find that writing down my feeligns expresses best
All my emotions in their truest
How Ironic is it that an angel clips my wings
yet every time I see her, my heart swings
OBEY THE MIGHTY SHITKICKER
#2
Looks like you wrote this as a poem, lol. Not bad...the only part I don't really feel are:

Unfortunately so have your letters
Despite the many I have to show


It's that 2nd line there that bothers me...the whole feeling of the song is that the letters being sent to you are decreasing. I don't see how that 2nd line connects with the theme in a supporting way.