#1
different from my usual (i know i always say that, but i actually mean it this time ). not really happy with this. ots. c4c, leave a link. i know i owe some of you a crit, i'll get to you as soon as i can, probably on the weekend.


purple is for thugz


somewhere,
a smile
she grabbed my hand and said
"this is life."
blundering, improvised
out of time.
we sang on street corners
and left christmas presents under
street lights
painted days with playful rhymes. -
an earthquake came and
made things go back
to the sky,
out of time.
now,
i sleep at parks
whispering alternate stories to the
static dark
drawing her face on the back of
art gallery flyers
invisible. casually
dreaming of cotton fields
and flowers
thinking how she's doing
the same,
some place else,
somewhere
#3
hey man, thanks. glad you enjoyed it. do you have anything you want me to look at? i owe you
#4
I suppose if you feel like it, you can hit up "do us a favour" in my sig. Otherwise, wait until i do something new.
#7
i kind of like it without the last somewhere.

Very good though. Smooth, delicate, nicely done.

I like it
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#8
"whispering alternate stories to the
static dark
"
Favorite

Well done. It's light; it feel like the wind swept it in and swept it right back away.
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theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

#9
ahhh this is amazing, i just actually love it
I know you think that I'm someone you can trust.
But I'm scared i'll get scared and i swear i'll try to nail you back up.



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