#1
I was listening to an mp3 of one of DigUpHerBones's songs on her profile, and a melody occurred to me, and a guitar part. I entertained the notion of recording her song with a different guitar part and melody, but I decided that was presumptuous and faintly creepy, so instead I wrote my own dang song. It goes like this:

I can't account for all the words I have
But they're the finest salve
And irritant I know
When I retreat and lie in bed at night
Or when I pick a fight
With you for some imagined slight
I know that words can pull my blows
Or drive them home

I'd love an unconditional trust between us
And when the dust between us settles
I know I'll settle for what I have
I trust the unconditional love between us
No one can shove between us
Our love was built to last

I can't account for all the words I said

The mp3 can be heard on my profile, if you're interested. The recording is probably pretty quiet, so you might have to turn up.

peace
Last edited by Nilchii at Feb 26, 2009,
#2
In and of themselves I like the density of rhyming but in the end I think it gives it a sing-songy childish air that doesn't suit.

/brief comment
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