#2
Sounds great.

The slow down at 1:30 seems a little awkward... might need something more defined there or a different transition down. Adding vocals might address this too... in fact this track is dying for vocals to complete it. Has potential to be a killer song with the right lyrics and singing.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1076238
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