For a scholarship i am applying for i was asked to state my favorite classes in high school and say why. this is what i wrote:

During high school, two classes that I have enjoyed taking were Pre-Calculus and Introduction to CAD. These classes have challenged me to think outside the box and in turn helped me to do the same in other classes resulting in higher grades and a better work ethic.

does anybody have any suggestions to this? this covers 2 and a half lines and they provided 7 so does anybody have any suggestions to beef it up without making it seem like too much information. I would ask a teacher or my parents, but my parents don't give a **** whether or not i go to college and my teachers are too stuck up to help.