aceral1715
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2007
527 IQ
#1
This song isn't really finished yet, but I wanted to get people's opinions of what i've done so far. It doesn't have lyrics or a melody so far but the basics of the song are finished.
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oydjn v.zip
GodofGuitar1991
I play sleeping
Join date: Jun 2008
811 IQ
#2
its really good and carries its own melody. but take off all the ringing in the brigde. maybe just have the top string ringing.
tukk04
UG's Neil Young
Join date: Sep 2008
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#5
Quote by GodofGuitar1991
this is supposed to have a random shreddy feel....

that's one awesome song!
it makes me think of what it would sound like if Lamb Of God wrote a doom metal song
Rukasu Rindu
isnt naked anymore, sry.
Join date: Jun 2007
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#6
Great, really great, but as GodofGuitar1991 said, remove the "ringing" in the Bridge section , made it all soud kinda messy.
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aceral1715
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Join date: Mar 2007
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#7
Quote by GodofGuitar1991
this is supposed to have a random shreddy feel....


Really nice song except that it gets kind of repetitive at times. It would prolly help to cut the number for repetitions for some of the riffs. Otherwise, some really catchy licks with drum beats that compliment the music. I would suggest adding a bass guitar which plays the same thing as the guitars most of the time. Not necessary, but i think it would sound good Nice harmonies around bar 50+. Endings good, but maybe a bit more build up to the final held note? anyways, 8/10
aceral1715
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#8
Quote by GodofGuitar1991
its really good and carries its own melody. but take off all the ringing in the brigde. maybe just have the top string ringing.


Thanks. When i had the rse turned on, the guitar seemed really in the background so the ringing didnt really bother me, but when the rse was off it got to me too :P
Ive changed it and i took your advice and only left the bass note ringing.
GodofGuitar1991
I play sleeping
Join date: Jun 2008
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#9
Quote by aceral1715
Thanks. When i had the rse turned on, the guitar seemed really in the background so the ringing didnt really bother me, but when the rse was off it got to me too :P
Ive changed it and i took your advice and only left the bass note ringing.



glad to help and thanks alot for you comments on my song
kylendm
Baronboi
Join date: Aug 2006
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#11
I liked that clean intro. The verse was pretty catchy i got to admit. The chorus was cool, i liked that part a bit. The breakbassdown was neat haha i liked it. Again a catchy a bridge. I really like the use of the bass in this song, it stands out compared to the other instruments. 8.5/10
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