#1
Hi guyss,

I'd love for some crit on my new song "cimmerian day" instrumental atm but hopefully getting lyrics,drums and bass up soon (y) Also crit on my other random song will be appreciated. Crit for crit of course.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/jammin24/

THANKS.
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#3
I'm guessing this is Metalcore which I'm not exactly a fan of but you make it sound really good. Like the user above you said I think you've got to cut the leads a little because it gets slightly monotonous, especially the harmonies although they're pretty cool the first couple of times. I like the solo at the end a lot. In fact except for a couple of things there's very little I don't like except for the "breakdown-ish" riff at the end. I feel like that was an awful breakdown and that you could have replaced that with something better but overall good song, and great guitar playing.

Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1074910
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#5
i used a metronome.., hahaa but thanks
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