vaporwave queen
Join date: Jun 2006
1,340 IQ
I have been working on this for a while and nothing has really come to me until now. It's probably one of my more straight forward rock songs. I'm not particularly fascinated with how the bridge turned out but there is always room for editing. There are no lyrics at the moment
Freakin' Feminist
Join date: Oct 2007
727 IQ
I like it, I don't have a whole lot to say as far as a crit goes, except that you're right about the bridge, the first half of it didn't seem to flow that well, but overall very good.
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2007
527 IQ
Its great. Nice drumming in the beginning with the toms and everything. Seemed very war-like to me. Like yuo said, the bridge could use some work, but the second half didnt seem too bad. And maybe a little stronger finish? 8.5/10

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