#2
I like it, I don't have a whole lot to say as far as a crit goes, except that you're right about the bridge, the first half of it didn't seem to flow that well, but overall very good.
9/10
BRIAN. SCHNEIDER.
#3
Its great. Nice drumming in the beginning with the toms and everything. Seemed very war-like to me. Like yuo said, the bridge could use some work, but the second half didnt seem too bad. And maybe a little stronger finish? 8.5/10

Crit one of mine? (any in the sig)