I like it, I don't have a whole lot to say as far as a crit goes, except that you're right about the bridge, the first half of it didn't seem to flow that well, but overall very good.
Its great. Nice drumming in the beginning with the toms and everything. Seemed very war-like to me. Like yuo said, the bridge could use some work, but the second half didnt seem too bad. And maybe a little stronger finish? 8.5/10

Crit one of mine? (any in the sig)