You don't get a second chance at a first impression, it would have been better for you to just wait, and record a better quality version.

Criticisms - You could try to implement some more vibrato into your playing, granted you've only been playing two years and are only 13, but its never to early to start almost anything imo.

The start was ok, the fast bit was ok, but from 0:30 onwards needs some work.
Not bad though, very good infact considering you've only been playing two years.

Keep up the good work and good luck to you sir!
Thanks gonna try get a Canon Rock cover on soon and a better quality version of that.